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:''The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. <span style="color:red">'''Please do not modify this page.'''</span> Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as [[{{TALKPAGENAME}}|this nomination's talk page]], [[Talk:{{SUBPAGENAME}}|the article's talk page]] or [[Wikipedia talk:Did you know]]), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. '''No further edits should be made to this page'''.''

The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 03:32, 6 February 2022 (UTC)<br />
{{DYK conditions}}
{{DYK header|JumpStart Toddlers}}
{{DYK nompage links|nompage=JumpStart Toddlers|JumpStart Toddlers}}
* ... that the ''[[Chicago Sun-Times]]'' credits '''''[[JumpStart Toddlers]]''''' (1996) as the first video game targeted towards babies? <small>Source: [https://web.archive.org/web/20180612162055/https://www.highbeam.com/doc/1P2-4414771.html Chicago Sun-Times 1997 article]</small>
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** ''Comment'': Open to alternative suggestions for the hook.

QPQ: [[Template:Did you know nominations/Qadi al-Fadil]]<br><br>
<small>Article created by [[User:Coin945|Coin945]] on January 20, 2022 ([[User talk:Coin945|talk]]). Self-nominated at 16:27, 20 January 2022 (UTC).</small>
* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Article creation date was recent enough, size is adequate, [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=JumpStart_Toddlers&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 Copyvio score] is very good and the hook is interesting while cited in-line properly, but you need to write "the" before ''Chicago Sun-Times'' and the source should have a title on this page; do this by using [ ] with the URL first. Also, the article is using an [[WP:RSP|unreliable]] source in PR Newswire that has gotta go for it to meet the DYK eligibility and the QPQ needs an icon representing the verdict before it counts properly. [[User:Kyle Peake|K. Peake]] 22:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
:*Note to [[User:Coin945|Coin945]] and [[User:Kyle Peake|K. Peake]]: the QPQ is not yet fully done—reviews are not considered complete until one of the review icons from the table above the edit window has been included as part of the review. I hope it will be completed soon. Thank you. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 15:19, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
::*I agree with you {{u|BlueMoonset}} and the detail of my possible vote has now been updated to reflect this. [[User:Kyle Peake|K. Peake]] 22:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

* Thank you for the review {{ping|Kyle Peake}} and {{ping|BlueMoonset}}. I've posted my comments below: --[[User:Coin945|Coin945]] ([[User talk:Coin945|talk]]) 22:52, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
*# Added "the" before ''Chicago Sun-Times''
*# Added title to source
*# Question: Why is the [[press release]] publisher [[PR Newswire]] unreliable?
*# Added icon to QPQ
:*Look at [[WP:RSP]], where PR Newswire is clearly listed as unreliable. [[User:Kyle Peake|K. Peake]] 07:49, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
::*{{ping|Kyle Peake}} I've addressed this by removing all PR Newswire links.--[[User:Coin945|Coin945]] ([[User talk:Coin945|talk]]) 12:59, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
:::*{{ping|Coin945}} [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Everything seems good now, this should be ready for promotion to DYK! [[User:Kyle Peake|K. Peake]] 21:38, 3 February 2022 (UTC)</div><includeonly>|}}</includeonly>

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